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Re: Love handles hold too tightly
Get off my fucking couch. Pretentious, legs rent open and lips so bloated that you sound dumb, you are dumb. It seems to burn and bubble where you stroke my ...
Aug 4, 2006 -
Re: untranslatable
(I only touch the shore because all seas must have an end somewhere[s] so this is mine[/s]) I enjoyed this. You're a good poet, bubblewrapped, and I wish we had ...
Aug 4, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Supposedly one. What a nightmare. --Captain Aloisio Yeah, well, you didn't have to raise it. :roll: --Emperor Would you ever do something for somebody out of pity?
Aug 3, 2006 -
Re: Nail Staircase
yeah, yeah, i know. The nail marks never started at the top - no, we were always halfway when we realized we were falling down, down with nothing to leave ...
Aug 2, 2006 -
Re: Jack in the Box
Put spaces between the paragraphs on this site. It makes it easier to read.
Aug 1, 2006 -
Re: best planet in the solar system
Definitely Venus. Feisty, but a beaut.
Aug 1, 2006 -
Re: Water-Glass Chat
Yes, that was my intent, Magicman =] Thanks, all of you.
Aug 1, 2006 -
Re: In Search of Sleep
Tossing and turning throughout the night I listen to the nearby train Who cries out in the lonely night Overuse of "night". Hope you get some sleep.
Aug 1, 2006 -
Re: Ode to Someone's Mother
caught in the undertow of a thought carried away on the broken back of an undisciplined rhythm passing through subatomic slipstreams and defective dream catchers laughing waves of an alien ...
Aug 1, 2006 -
Re: thoughts through scissor blades
Snoink's right. Weak ending, undeserving of such a good poem. Let me try to understand There’s this feeling in my hand It is a blade sinking deeper in my skin? ...
Aug 1, 2006 -
Re: Background Characters + HowThey Can Seriously Screw You Over
I agree with all advice on this thread, which is a bit confusing, but none the matter. In any case, my backgruond characters are usually very defined characters that question ...
Jul 31, 2006 -
Re: Starter Speech
Calligraphy is accomplishment burned and etched into lambskin paper lining ancient walls, modern minds. Axis titled, the earth is crooked, like melting clocks and bacon, but we are the ones ...
Jul 31, 2006 -
Re: Person Above Ya!
^ is the same age as me. (hallelujah, there are a lot of people the same age as me here. i thought there was only a handful. =] )
Jul 31, 2006 -
Re: Water-Glass Chat
The hour was early. 3:06AM. The numbers on the display screen wavered, and I rubbed the sleep from my eyes anxiously, shifting around in my seat as I did so. ...
Jul 31, 2006 -
Re: Silhouettes of Life
It's best when things have a common need and they aren't a collection of random phrases. Pretty phrases are nice, but I think you need to apply...er...something coherent?
Jul 31, 2006
