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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Love handles hold too tightly

    Get off my fucking couch. Pretentious, legs rent open and lips so bloated that you sound dumb, you are dumb. It seems to burn and bubble where you stroke my ...

    Aug 4, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: untranslatable

    (I only touch the shore because all seas must have an end somewhere[s] so this is mine[/s]) I enjoyed this. You're a good poet, bubblewrapped, and I wish we had ...

    Aug 4, 2006
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    Supposedly one. What a nightmare. --Captain Aloisio Yeah, well, you didn't have to raise it. :roll: --Emperor Would you ever do something for somebody out of pity?

    Aug 3, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: Nail Staircase

    yeah, yeah, i know. The nail marks never started at the top - no, we were always halfway when we realized we were falling down, down with nothing to leave ...

    Aug 2, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Jack in the Box

    Put spaces between the paragraphs on this site. It makes it easier to read.

    Aug 1, 2006
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: best planet in the solar system

    Definitely Venus. Feisty, but a beaut.

    Aug 1, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Water-Glass Chat

    Yes, that was my intent, Magicman =] Thanks, all of you.

    Aug 1, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: In Search of Sleep

    Tossing and turning throughout the night I listen to the nearby train Who cries out in the lonely night Overuse of "night". Hope you get some sleep.

    Aug 1, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: Ode to Someone's Mother

    caught in the undertow of a thought carried away on the broken back of an undisciplined rhythm passing through subatomic slipstreams and defective dream catchers laughing waves of an alien ...

    Aug 1, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: thoughts through scissor blades

    Snoink's right. Weak ending, undeserving of such a good poem. Let me try to understand There’s this feeling in my hand It is a blade sinking deeper in my skin? ...

    Aug 1, 2006
  • Writing Tips Re: Background Characters + HowThey Can Seriously Screw You Over

    I agree with all advice on this thread, which is a bit confusing, but none the matter. In any case, my backgruond characters are usually very defined characters that question ...

    Jul 31, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: Starter Speech

    Calligraphy is accomplishment burned and etched into lambskin paper lining ancient walls, modern minds. Axis titled, the earth is crooked, like melting clocks and bacon, but we are the ones ...

    Jul 31, 2006
  • Randomosity Re: Person Above Ya!

    ^ is the same age as me. (hallelujah, there are a lot of people the same age as me here. i thought there was only a handful. =] )

    Jul 31, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Water-Glass Chat

    The hour was early. 3:06AM. The numbers on the display screen wavered, and I rubbed the sleep from my eyes anxiously, shifting around in my seat as I did so. ...

    Jul 31, 2006
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Silhouettes of Life

    It's best when things have a common need and they aren't a collection of random phrases. Pretty phrases are nice, but I think you need to apply...er...something coherent?

    Jul 31, 2006


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